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Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 520 / 550
Exp. Rank #: 60,929
Voting Pow.: 4.96 votes
BBS Posts: 19 (0.02 per day)
Flash Reviews: 78
Music Reviews: 0
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Script fit well. Animation matched original style.
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I really liked it. The music really lifted my mood! The dragon and the colorful background matched it too.
I would have liked it more if there were more things too, like more fantasy elements and whatnot.
btw, what's the song called?
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guitarfever.dmu
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I admire your sense of pacing. You know how to make it so I don't feel bored halfway through.
You are a master of sound effects. Good job!
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I wanna start off by saying good job and making sure you quoted where your pictures where from. Otherwise I could have blown the whistle.
Some tips...
Using gradients is kind of dull. Try to be more creative with filler graphics.
Make sure the pictures are nice and even. You didn't remove the subtitles in the first slide, and you don't have to stretch the pictures to fill up the screen.
The pictures themselves were believable but not entertaining. I gave you a fair score.
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Mario, Luigi, and Bowser turned Anime. Now I've seen everything!
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The advice you gave was fine, and so was the level of animation.
However, for actual advice, I recommend working on your pacing. It simply too long to finish. I was kind of bored halfway through. Two things to make pacing faster are one, dont drag the lines so much or leave empty spaces between them, or two, use generic music to fill the void,
I know you're not going to read my review, or even reply to it, but I'm going to think you read this anyway, or by some supernatural force you ended up taking my advice without reading it.
Lulz.
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If you change the lyrics ofcourse. Funny too.
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I liked the part where he said he liked penis.
I didn't understand the "deadlines" thing.
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I took an hour to get to 50.
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He justed wanted a fag. Don't we all XD
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